Good start however, there are several problems that need to be adjusted. Biggest problem is the perspective issues. Right now you have low horizon line and the viewer eye level is somewhere around the knee area of the wooden robot building in the mid ground. However the characters are all below the EL of viewer/ camera and very small which creates false scale in this picture, there for the space/ atmosphere becomes very short and shallow. The way camera is set up right now doesn't seem not that far away from the action however the characters make it feel like we are looking this from like very far distance. (This is very typical amature mistake that people who doesn't have a strong understanding of the perspective makes.) also if you look at the Asian looking building, the wall or the mountain on the left side, they all look like we are looking straight at it instead of feeling like we are looking up at it, which also doesn't make sense / doesn't support the camera. Idea is cool but you are completely ignoring a lot of important stuff you need to address so look at it carefully and try to organize what went wrong and what you need to do to achieve the look you want.
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ReplyDeleteGood start however, there are several problems that need to be adjusted. Biggest problem is the perspective issues. Right now you have low horizon line and the viewer eye level is somewhere around the knee area of the wooden robot building in the mid ground. However the characters are all below the EL of viewer/ camera and very small which creates false scale in this picture, there for the space/ atmosphere becomes very short and shallow. The way camera is set up right now doesn't seem not that far away from the action however the characters make it feel like we are looking this from like very far distance. (This is very typical amature mistake that people who doesn't have a strong understanding of the perspective makes.) also if you look at the Asian looking building, the wall or the mountain on the left side, they all look like we are looking straight at it instead of feeling like we are looking up at it, which also doesn't make sense / doesn't support the camera. Idea is cool but you are completely ignoring a lot of important stuff you need to address so look at it carefully and try to organize what went wrong and what you need to do to achieve the look you want.
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